Looks good from here. The Elk is a nice touch! cool 1
I would move your first liner pin toward your bolster and your second liner pin down toward the edge of your stag. The end pin should hold your stag in place in the back, but that Elk could move a bit near the bolster and where your fingers wrap around the handle.
As for fit and finish...like I said from what I can see it looks good. Here are some questions that I ask myself when I make a slip joint.
How is the action?
Is there any play in the blade when the knife is open.....or closed?
Does it open and close smoothly?
Does it have a good snap?
What about the spring in all three positions... is it flush?
Is the blade centered?
Are all the corners smooth?
How does it feel in the hand?
How does it feel in the pocket?
Can you see any scratches with a magnifying glass?
Are there any gaps between the spring and the liners when I hold it up to a light?
I try to pick it apart before it ever gets chicken eyed by anyone else. I always miss something...or see something after its to late to fix. But that just fuels the fire in me to make another one
Keep up the good work!