Larry,
It looks great! But I can't say I am sold on your enchant. Plus the length of time in soaking in it. Seriously, when I,m ready to etch, all I do is soak the corner of a paper towel and wipe it on real good, make sure.it stays wet for 90 sec, then neutralize. I'd try it both ways to see which is best, your acid solution may be too strong, also. Aside from what I think if you're happy with it that is all that matters, I've gotten pretty good at them because I put one every knife I make practically. OH and the secret to getting more activity is a.combo of lines angling or straight down toward the edge, the other.part.is that clay needs.to be THIN. IT makes a big difference, and be creative, if you screw.it.up re HT it and start over! REX