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Clydetz
11-09-2009, 08:40 PM
I had the first sentence saved in my computer files and without the aid of a beer or two, (my neighbor left a can of Bud in my frig and took my Beck's last week) I slapped a few words together and now it's finished. When the mood hits me, I usually make things rhyme... this doesn't rhyme and I don't care. ;)


I never knew…

I never knew what a good dog I had
until you were taken from me.
The good Lord above… he took you home
and left me with a broken heart.
You were a friend to me all of your life
and stayed by my side through it all.
I considered you my very good friend
now I’m lost without you sitting by my side.
You saw me through the good times and bad
and never once did I hear you complain.
I’ll end this now but will never forget
the dog that brought so much joy to my life.

Chris Martin
11-09-2009, 08:50 PM
They dont all have to rhyme my bro. Great little piece. I have a few pups I miss myself:(

Thanks for sharing.

Chris


I usually make things rhyme... this doesn't rhyme and I don't care. ;)


I never knew…

I never knew what a good dog I had
until you were taken from me.
The good Lord above… he took you home
and left me with a broken heart.
You were a friend to me all of your life
and stayed by my side through it all.
I considered you my very good friend
now I’m lost without you sitting by my side.
You saw me through the good times and bad
and never once did I hear you complain.
I’ll end this now but will never forget
the dog that brought so much joy to my life.

TKC
11-09-2009, 09:13 PM
I like that. I have a few pups that I will always miss.

Clydetz
11-10-2009, 09:01 AM
Thanks... I just couldn't see that first sentence go to waste.